Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Bored Writing: Who Got Me? Audio included

Wait till i get a good mic! I'm comin...


Who Got Me (Freestyle) - TyLFI
[UPDATE: The song is on Imeem
click ^ to listen
]

Im 'dead sick'
Can't you see me-'coffin'?
The dead part of life
Lives on
when I write
I guess the pen is the doctor
And ink is
medicinal
Ridiculed
Dispensed with a click of the writing tool
And the
medicine happens to be 'lighter fuel'
It figures
Because none of what I write
is 'cool'
Am I a fool for using flames as a cure?
Sometimes it helps
Other
times its burns even more
Thanks Usher
Ill 'let it burn'
But never a
'confession'
Just pleads for a blessing
Testing...
A bolt lock
arrived
Comprised of lessons and lies
Lies was the 'key'
It only 'turns
into' lessons
Im messin
'You don't gotta call' me crazy
Just thoughtful
maybe...
...says my lady


Its my Vietnam
Fight for nothing but
survival
Love is the rival
But my rival is apart of me
I kill myself if I
shoot it with a rifle
But how would I live
how would i live
It suicide to do
what he did...
I don't dig...
My grave is above ground
Walking 'heartless'
with no love now
Why should they keep me 'locked down'
Sigh
I used to
love
But now I hate to love
I guess opposite day came true
And red became
blue
Passion's lackadaisical
What happened to its action
It weak
No
ration
But irration
Nonsensible
Super pitiful
Full of ridicule
Ingested
minerals...
Producing what's general
The thoughts are of many 'fools'
But im
cool..
Ha
Forget love and it's crazy deeds
The only love I needs in me
By
myself
Alone with my thoughts
Locked in a room with an idiot box
Ha
It
survival ofcourse
Just Heartless Remorse
Driving the course
Watch out for
his vengeance
He 'drives' on a 'sentence'
Ink is the 'gas'
His 'speed' is
'penned in'
With rage he wins it
Off to the 'finish'...
Unblemished

Unless the track is endless
Lets end it...
~wind blows!

2 comments:

pasteljets said...

yo this neptune from the wearepasteljets.blogspot.com... preciate the looks on poetry and shit i got some audio on the blog now... check it out and leave some criticism(good or bad).

close your eyes when u listen(its like a movie).

~neptunejune~

Lyrical Laureate said...

jesusssssssssss

OKKK... u Lyrically went in...

Love the wordplay